Colors of Life and Death

Fave reviews

Just a place to house the reviews I've liked the most. Some of them are hilarious!
They are posted in the order of which they were recieved and many have been edited to include only the best parts. Enjoy. ^_^\/

I just read chapter 1 and I'm crying right now. Your writing is so poetic! ~FFz
Even graphically descriptive to a point where it comes alive!~DBoon (A/N- For some reason I just loved the 'comes alive' comment)
Don't tell me that Kyuubi made Naruto pregnant! What if he endowded Naruto with ALL his powers?!?! Do you know how crazy that would drive everyone for Naruto to have all his energy plus Kyuubi's? Do you know how expensive it would get to keep him at full strength considering how much he eats already?!?!?!? ~Saria19
I'm eager to find out about Kyuubi's present. If it involves Naruto gaining fox features like 9 tails, ears, fangs, ang red eyes, Hinata had better get used to brushing shed fur off her clothes after they hug. ~Dragonman180
Having Naruto and Sasuke get together and care for each other but not yaoi? One point in my books. Having Sakura care for Naruto without falling in love with him? two points! Having Naruto and Hinata fall in love? A MILLION POINTS! yay!! I like how you did that chakra change thing and explained it too, great idea. More NaruHina fluffiness please? :puppydogeyes: ~chibified kitsunes (A/N- You'll see a lot of Chibi-chan's reviews here. Lol)
Wow...Naruto screaming...hottay...*shifts eyes*... ya i'm a pervert .. back off! That evil bastard orochimaru! Torture is nice tho.. awe u actually made me cry, usually I like that kinda thing, but when Naruto was talking about it.. I had tears in my eyes... until I slapped myself.. Then I stopped..
Anyways my lecherous little children are loving ur story.. they say they want to eat it... awe my silly little lemmings.. ~Maltia (A/N- Very often she scares me. O_o Lol.)
I.want.that.BED!!~Little Fox Kit (A/N- LOL)
nonono!! *throws computer at songbird21* it was so short! cries...
I like you OC Nabiki, she's nice. ~chibified kitsunes (A/N- Ahhh. Many a computer has suffered at the hands of Chibi-chan.)
*crawling on floor* so much reading...barely...on...ninth...chapter. *dies* *head comes up again* hehheh,Old Granny Tsunade,hee *dies again* ~WalkieTalkie
Wee! heehee... that was wonderful. Longer but... still short!! *throws another computer at songbird* hehehehe... ~chibified kitsunes
NaruHina!! I need it... please provide it if you can... Yum ramen... ^_^ And now I will finish off my randomness by glomping Sasuke ::glomps Sasuke:: >__< He's so cool in the story... Him and Naruto are bro bros... yay! ~minimerc
A god-forgotten pc ? what don't you stop ducking and catch one of those who chibi-chan throws at you ;) ~Dragon Noir
grrrr... be thankful that i've run out of computers to throw.. XD throws both shoes at songbird21 instead. Hope that got u in the face! >.< Just kidding. ~chibified kitsunes
Since chibi-chan didn't throw a thing at you this time...*reveal a shuriken set and prepare them*. Bring Naru-Hina fluff *throws some of the shurikens and pins Songbird to a wall* Now you know what's coming *does an evil grin while taking out some kunais* ~Dragon Noir
Whoever made that training course was a very skilled sadist. ~Dragonman180 (A/N- *Bows* Why thank you. Lol.)
about the part with your Reviewers being mean to you *Holds up a Fuuma Shuriken* they'll have to get past me First. ~Shadow-Sensei (A/N- Ahh. My protectors. They are few and far between. Lol)
Realistic relationships + naruto and hinata + good writing = great chapter! ::eyes on fire like rock lee style:: OH! ~DBoon
Will the letter said that yondaime-dono was Naruto's father? Will the identity of his mother also be revealed? With all this, will tsunade still have the guts to ask naruto about her adopting him? How will naruto react to all of this informations? What will his feelings be? Will Hinata comes in play to soothe his raging mind? Will his next ramen be miso or pork? Will the ichiraku give him a prize of This Year's Best Customer? Is Kakashi even taking down his mask for brushing his teeth? Will I stop asking stupid questions and kill this stupid cookie who has been teasing me for the 5 previous minutes while I was typing this ?I feel like i forgot something...hum...oh yeah, but I will let chibi-chan beat the living daylights out of you *evil grin* no need to deprive her of her fun ~Dragon Noir
I find that Hinata's finger habit makes her look inocent when she does it while blushing, but then again I also think that she blushes because she has an active imagination where Naruto is concerned and is a one man pervert. ~Cobra-100
(drops some grenades on manatheron and contemplate his smoking body) so you want everyone of your reviewers to be like this? It'll be my pleasure (smiles a grin that'ld make itachi run with his life) ~Dragon Noir
I never liked the Hinata Naruto pairing, I prefer Hina/Kiba, but this is too great! You've opened my eyes to the utter CUTENESS of them as a couple! ~Rachel (A/N- This review just made me soooo happy.)
I love your story so much I reread it 6 times I hope u update soon I really love chapter 11 & 12 co'z of the NarHina thing but still I really really admire you cause your really so good at making fanfics *hugs Songbird21 tightly* your so great at this I'm looking forward to more NaruHina! ~NaruHina113 (Reviews like these just make my day. ^_^)
You know... I think that your experiences as a parent really help make this story believable. ~Your-Bones-Akin
Great job on the letter, I had people asking me in the library why I was tearing up. ~Coco Cow
By the way there's been quite some time since something has been thrown at you... oh well *go back to his book "Torture for beginners" by Morino Ibiki* ~Dragon Noir
*sneaks into ur house at night* fufufu *nibbels a cookie* Yummy^.^ *eats the cookie* mmh *Pokes U* poke poke poke poke poke poke poke *Looks that author wakes up* yo *dodges a fuuma shurukin* Barrier no jutsu. *Looks at author-chan with fiery flames of apssion burning in his eyes* I didn't add u on my alert list T.T *eats another cookie* no u shall work at next chapter *pulls out a whip* eep *gets hit by 6 fuuma start thingys* owie, damn, well since I can't whip u to write I gotta glare at u *Gives author-sama the EYE* ~Dual Rasengan
peekaboo- after a long absence in the reviewing community, chibi-chan has finally resurrected from her grave ~chibified kitsunes
I would be terrifying chibified though. Like a little hell spawn. ~raging hobo
Any chance of Gaara in this story? Gaara rules. If not, I understand -- the muses do what they want, it's almost impossible to force them. Stubborn muses, won't listen to a word we say... *grumbles and stomps off.* ~XStarFoxX
I'll join the ranks of your protectors. I may be small, but I'll be able to take care of any thrown objrcts thanks to my great reflexes. And that seems to be how most are attacking. ~RLnaruhina
*Sniff Sniff* That's so sad! Poor Naruto! He needs councling. Run Jiraiya Run! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ~Arnold
Well, since you want serious critique of this chapter, I'll get all the fan-spazzing for the last 20 out of the way now, else this review'll be a chapter on it's own! ^_^'
OHMYSQUISHILOVEITSOMUCHSOCUTEANDFLUFFYAND- ~Cloud-1-3-5 and Ame Emi Dai
Ohohoho~ you found me out songbird-san... however did you find out about me slipping your muse caffeine? Oh~! The suspense! You sure are evil... Shoves mug after mug of coffee and coke into your muse's mouth... Muahaha~ That should make it go and you update soon enough! =P ~chibified kitsunes
As always its a great chapter Songbird-sama ~Shadow-Sensei (A/N- He called me 'sama' *Giggles* It's just too cool. ^_^
Just... wow. That was awesome. The whole chapter was a work of art, from Naruto's reaction to Tsunade's hug (bang on in-character) to Sakura thinking about Sasuke to Naruto and Hinata finally getting together. That last scene in particular was among the best I've read on here - far too many just gloss over it, or end up being horribly clumsy, but that was... well, smooth, sweet, in-character, and brought a smile to my face and even a quiet squee. Quiet because I'm once again at work. ~Cloud-1-3-5
ohohohoh...okay, to be honest, Im one of the biggest (if not the biggest) yaoi fans you'll EVER get to meet, hohoho...and..damn, youve got some balls for managing to het me hooked to your story and also for READING ALL 22 CHAPS IN LESS THAN 3 HOURS OMFG MY EYES HAVE BEEN BURNED INTO THE SCREEN A~H!! *utter scream of pain* O_O *takes out a big katana and points at you* now to make it clear, I CANT stand a het naruto pairing! meaning I hate narusaku, naruino, naruhina, narusomeothergirl BU~~T *sing songs* you somehow managed to get me all...giggly...ah...and acting so...so...like a fan-girl would act whenever these is some sweet naruhins moment, argh! >.< honestly...and some parts of your fic also made me all teary-eyed and it took all of my self-control to stop those tears from faling(dont worry, I took out the frustration on my wall...amen) >.< also...I LOVE THIS STORY! THE SUSPENSE AND HOW NARUTO GOT HURT!! *goes into "Im a crazy maniac Im gonna do nasty things to you and all fear me" mode* you made a mistake of managing to get me hooked to this O_O *wicked smile* update >) update >)) muahaha..UPDATE AND WRITE SOME MORE NARUTO INJURIED/HURT/CRYING/BLEEDING/SOBBING MUAHAHAH ANGST ANGST GORE BLOOD DEATH *rants* >) and this -> >) is a cute innocent smile, it just strikes you as an evil one, don worry, honestly >) just upda~te *insert evil laugh* ~Liliath
(A/N- I was dead silent for a good minute after reading this...then I about died laughing.)
oh yes, and before i forget... *throws my slipper at songbird for making jiraiya cry* [cackles] ~chibified kitsunes
At any rate, I'm always happy to see new chapters from you. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy, and let me tell you, that's a really weird feeling for a guy to have. ;-P ~XL (A/N- *Snort* LOL)
Thanks for answering my questions. I was so sure that those characters you made up were real Naruto canon. I even went to a few sites to get some more info on them! ~Clark Cradic
Tsunade calling hiashi a pompous ass was brilliant! That certainly straightened him out! hehe ~chibified kitsunes
Blood... yum... ~Cornpuffs
wait wait wait! *is obviously very stunned* jiriyas in love with Tsunade?? ...EW!*nasty images* PLZ UPDATE CUZ IT ROCKS!*flees screaming about her mental purity* ~Insane Immortal Dragon
*bangs on reader-proof room!!* NO come on get out!! i have cookies!!~Fullmetal chibi-chan
Oh...Damn. I was going to type out my wonderfully long string of invectives.. but that might be detrimental to the story in progress. Suffice it to say, you are evil. Songbird-sama shall feel the oh so squirrely wrath of.. my minions? No, thats not it. Of.. henchmen?
Poo bah. You want something done right you gotta do it yourself! So therefore thou shalt face a fate most terrible, a result of the squirrely wrath of me...I...myself? Oh well. Me, if an update is not swiftly forthcoming...
Imagine this sad scene:
The poor authoress is sitting quietly in front of her computer, in the middle of the town in which she lives. There shall be sun and daisies on that day.. but then! then will come an awful premonition to the happy (and not so happy) townsfolk of the region... they will huddle indoors by their fireplaces (if, indeed the authoress lives somewhere cold.. and if the happy-and not so happy- townsfolk have a fireplace) and think to themselves.. gee, a coldfront is coming in.. i totally just got the shivers dude! Inside the house/condo/room of the wonderful- and yet evil- songbird-sama an email will be opened (or several o.0) and then shall come a doom most terrible upon the muse of songbird sama. there shall be pain.. yes. as the unhappy reviewer inflicts the death of a thouand creepy (and crappy!) reviews. ~Zashera (A/N- LOL)
YES YOU BETTER RUN! THAT was a purely evil cliff hanger! You have two options from where you are, as i seem em. ONE: WE READERS WANT BLOOD! YOUR BLOOD! Or another update soon =) Preferably the update, but beaten up author looks not so bad either. ~inu-youkess
(jaw drops) You end it THERE?!?! ~CrazyGirlofManyNames (A/N- I just found the way she worded that funny)
...I can best sum up my reaction to this chapter with one simple phrase, that I actually muttered under my breath when I finished reading... "Oh... fucking hell..." ~Cloud-1-3-5 and Ame Emi Dai
I can get in anywhere I want...for I am: THE BEAUTIFUL KUNOICHI RYUU! (evil laugh of doom) ~Ryuu no Taiyo
*cackles and puts on a rubber suit* buahahaha!! i thought you would have learned by now that you can't stop chibi from stalking j00! *strangles songbird* ~chibified kitsunes
ill conet the fence to the house get a lock smith, poor water on the fence, and feed an elephant ur favirote meal while u watch and suffer. MUahahahahhahahaha...ha..haha ~warriorseadra
Great story so far. But please back from useing major cliff hangers. 1. I have 55 gallons of tar and I'm sure somebody will loan out some chicken feathers, All just for you [:p]. And 2. well I have 55 gallons of tar. Any more cliff hangers like the last one, well... the readers will forced to use 'em. Plus you'll get no cookies. :) ~kzinti7
*Uses her awesome ninja skills and easily gets into Song's room* *captures her muse and starts giving it caffine* PLEASE!PLEASE! PLEASE get another chapter out asap! This is THE coolest story I have read and it was the exact thing I was looking for! I always wanted Naruto to be Orochimaru's target! Then I found this and I thought I died and went to Heaven! PLEASE do another! *uses adorable puppy dog eyes* ~AngelusTheAngelicDemon(A/N-LMAO)
(Dances like a bunny on a DDR pad...if that's possible) ~Mage-of-Souls
Special Eddition 'Death' Threat!
ME: Get the submarines...we need some underwater vessels. You! Get some tanks...we can drive 'em over the subs, and break down the door to this supposedly 'reader proof room' SOLDIERS: Hai! ME: *to an empty room* Heh, I will force you to work twice as fast as usual! Muwahahahahahahahahahahaha! Nothing can stop me, for I control the elemental power of cookies! Fetch the whips! Drive the monkeys! We will make you write! ~Suzerain
You also have managed to make me feel like im in the story, I am sad when they are, I even blushed at some of the NarHin scenes... ~Naruto no Kyuubi (A/N- *Grins* Yay!)
Glad Oro's dead and so's his little subordinate. *pokes ashes with a stick*
Yeah, you don't need the room this time...BUT I have a different plan this time...and it doesn't involve you...just the room...
Into insane story time mode:
Running. Footsteps running to the top of the hill. Pausing.
"There's the target."
"The author?"
A smirk.
"Nah, the Room."
"I see."
"Get that rocket launcher ready, and aim through the door. It's open."
He stops, his team mate lies down, and aims the gun. "3...2...1...BOOM!"
The rocket leaves a silent trail as it dissapears into the room, exploding, poisonous gas being expelled, the inside turned into a roaring inferno.
Heh, heh, I put the RPR out of commission! *cackles* But anything valuble inside, I removed first and put under your chair. Don't want to accidentally destroy neccessary computing equipment. Heh heh. I took my chance. Whe! Now you cannot hide from us in the near foreseeable future anymore. MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. *gasps for air*~Suzerain
Making a 32 year old 200 pound boxing instructors eyes water when he's at work...FOR SHAME ! ~JohnHenley
Poor You. Have a hug. *gives hug* ~Suzerain (A/N- *Hugs back* Thank you)
That one was the one-in-ten that gets me. You wrote it so well, and it all came across very vividly - so much so that I can understand all too easily how poor Naruto (and poor you! ;_; *huggle*) must have felt. ~Cloud-1-3-5 and Ame Emi Dai (A/N- *Hugs back* Thank you)
That evil mother of hers! HURT HER! Have Sakura confront her or something. MAKE THE WOMAN SUFFER! I WANT BLOOD! Sorry, but she askedfor it by not letting Naruto join and letting him stay in the rain like that. Must...hurt...Sakura's...mother(Foaming at the mouth). ME WANT BLOOD! VENGENCE AND BLOOD! Sorry I'm getting carried away. BLOOD! LOL ~VFSNAKE
I have discovered you fic after your last update, and I read it all the way through, and I must say it is absolutely one of the very best Naruto fic's I've read. That is because you have what I like to call "talent" and you're using a realistic senarios. I absolutely love everything you've done, from Naruto's power, to his relationship with Hinata, to Lee, Saskue, TenTen (who I think will grab Saskue's attention. --- I am in desperate need of good Naruto Fanfiction, and yours is a rare one. ~Jeefus (A/N- *Blush*)
(throws hinata and naruto plushies everywhere) ~Lil'pineapple (A/N- Horray for plushies!)
WHOA! I WANNA A BOMB!! (A/N- LOL)*grins maniacally* PELASE UPDATE CUZ YOU KNOW I LOVE IT!! *hands you sasuke and naruto plushieS* ~Insane Immortal Dragon (A/N- Horray for plushies!)
I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! *dances for five hours strait while throwing confettie* okay..pant..that...wheeze ..was stupid...wheeze i still love this..coughcoughcough...story.*dies* ~wryter4-hire
You don't even want to KNOW how many times i've had the sudden urge to either die laughing or get a tissue. never mind the fact that you made me choke on my ice cream. gods, i spent the whole damned day reading this story! It'S ADDICTING! ~Kira Temeki (A/N-*Blush*)
Well, that was wonderfully laughtastic! *re-reads the 'you're out of your cage' part and falls to the floor laughing*
>ten minutes later<
My ribs hurt. *picks himself up off the floor* ~Ky Hakubi
(deep man voice cries) please finish ~dark master t
*steals chibi kyuubi*KAWAII NO DESU! ~pyro-chan the dragon king
WEEE! Fluffly fluffy fluff!Aw! Hinata-chan and Naruto-kun so adorible!
Squeal! Kakashi-kun and Tomoyo, sitting in a tree... *giggle fit* ^-^ I love the Fluff... ~BakaHammerGirl
AIE! naruto and hinata are so cute together! *squeels like a maniac* oh man their just perfect together! ~Chuni Luni
*chucks brick at Songbird21* Now I know why chibified kitsunes keeps throwin stuff at u. Its fun.*squeezes Itachi-kun*I hope the brick didnt hurt too much cause when I threw it at my brother he went to sleep for a couple of hours. ~DarkMaidenTerri
WHEE! I GOT THANKED!! I FEEL SO HAPPY!! AND...BURSTING WITH *looks up word in dictionary*...uh...a-hem..BLISSFULNESS! seriously, i ran outside at 11:45 pm yelling "I GOT THANKED BY THE MOST AWESOMEIST WRITER EVER!!" But then I realized that it was practially 12 in the mornin and decided to run inside before anyone called the police on me...-_-; Lol. I still love your story! I'm going to print out and copy this, run around town, and randomly tape this to people saying "YOU MUST READ IT!!" and run away like the crazed maniac i am... ~Keida (A/N- LMAO)
When I read the last 5 sentences I litarally yelled out nd indignant squeak ~VarianFAWKES
I hereby rename your muse. Henceforth, your muse shall be named Captain Morgan! 'Cause with those last five line, one of you was drinking something. ~XhaLe
*hands Songbird a cookie* eat it.. it'll help you think. ~Preconceived Notion
Actually, the last five sentences aren't very unusual. It's the result of a hypnotic suggestion I implanted in my review back in chapter 15. Morgan is secretly working for me, we've been paying her in sugar. Mwa ha ha ha ha. For my next psychic impulse, you won't be able to stop thinking of a date between Naruto and Hinata that involves the two of them going swimming and Hinata wearing little pink bikini...
Sorry, gotta go, my nose is bleeding again. ~Ambrant Arandel
OMFG OMFINGG! *screams* WHAT HAPENS WHAT'S WITH KYUUBI POPPING UP AGAIN!?!? AG UPDATTE OR I'LL HAVE TO STALK YOU! *Screams* ~Kira Temeki
Wow, just quite simply wow... keep up the stuff that I can only give a reaction of "wow" to. ~Kyubi-X
You owe me a new laptop because I spit the soda I was drinking all over my laptop. ~Infinite Freedom
Unlike Chibi and Dragonnoir I shall NOT throw a computer or other stuff at you. I like my PC too much for that...ok I lied *throws kunai, shurikens, fuuma shurikens, senbon needles, butcher knives, kitchen knives AND the dreaded teaspoons* ~Capito Celcior
*huggles a chibi kitsune plushie, and gives you one too* ~Insane Immortal Dragon (A/N- WOOT! More plushies!)
I would like to say this is a great story so far. Probably one of the best because not only does it have a great plot line, details, and original characters but it has twists that makes it exciting to read, a excellent Radio Play, and doujinshi! In all my time in I have never seen anything this good! I wish more people would Radio Play and draw Doujinshi that follow their Fanfiction. I would also like to say that you will be my first favorite author. ~WolfWarrior
Well, the end of book 1, eh? Time for the celebration. *sets of 37 fireworks* You desrve a round of applause for this! Hold on a sec... Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! *37 Ky's give standing ovation*
I also hired Spike Speigal, Jet Black, Faye Valetine, Vash the Stampede, Nicholas D. Wolfwood, Heero Yui, Duo Maxwell, Quatre Winner, Trowa Barton, Wu-Fei, the Suzaku Seven, Robocop, Dante, and Ryo Ohki to ive you a 21 gun salute. Unfortunately, the Suzaku Seven haven't used rifles before, so we had to settle on party poppers. I hope Ryo Ohki makes up for that. The Gundams probably help too. I always thought this story deserved to go out with a bang. I suppose a handful of high powered ballistics counts for 'bang'.
I will return! A raveneous pack of wolves with a severe inferiority complex couldn't keep me away from the sequel! Maybe I should shut up now... *ponders the quality of silence for a moment* Man. That was the toughest .00683 seconds of my life! My mind hurts. Hope to see more soon. I'm going to take an aspirin now. *waves goodbye as he searches for the Tyelenol* ~
tip top o the mountain old boy, true guinus with a light sprinkle of furry fun romance all wrapped up in a nutshell that just says BAM!(english translation) ok serious now. i am an avad lover of naruhina and have read countless storeys. you however have kicked to a level only reaced by a few, this work is sitting in my list of top three in with two halves by Dame Wren and Team 8 by Starkan. I thank you for a good story and am awaiting the sequel. ~ghost
Really. This is truly a work of art. First off, I would like to commend you for inputting events that happen in any normal teenager's life into the fanfiction. :3 Sometimes, people get so involved in the fantasy of a series that they don't really take the time to stop and think that these kids are growing kids as well, and are bound to experience the things that any normal teenager does; such as changing of the voice, growing taller, and of course, more emotional changes like maturity. BIG Kudos here. :D
That said, I would also like to say that Tsunade's motherly instincts are right on the money! Someone else who reviewed commented on the fact that your experience as a mother probably contributed to the fact that Tsunade was so completely motherlike. Your daughter is very lucky to have a mother like you. n.n
As for grammatical and spelling errors, I saw none; if there were any, I was too absorbed in the brilliant plotline to notice. Your writing style is beautiful, and every 'miraculous' thing that happened in the story was backed up by a reasoning that was completely beliveable, as far as the Naruto series goes. That in itself is a rarity in fanfiction; there are some people who make miracles happen and can't back them up with a reasoning that makes sense.
I can honestly see why this story gets so much praise; once I started reading, I couldn't stop until something important in real life came and took my attention away. Like I said above, this is truly a work of art ~